Not bad at all
Keep up the good work!
I like the way you madethe character walk off the screen and the way you shook the screen after every footstep from the monster. Good effects. I 5'd it so that it's hopefully protected. After all, it's obvious you spent a lot of time on this and I hate it when voters blam more than good enough entries like this. Keep up the good work!
thanks, i thought some people might like the walking-out-of-the-screen effect, or at least confuse them a bit ;)
the screen shake took ages, and i added the skipping music for effect :D
thanks, yeah i spent quite a while on it, and i allways like some positive comments
I really enjoyed this one fweespace...
Good artork and animation! Of course as it's one of your flashes I naturally lol'd!
Very funny... keep up the good work!
more on the way, xelA, feel free to hold your breath.
I am going to do what so many reviewers don't do and that is admit I have no flashes in the portal. So I'm not going to say "that was crap try harder".
I really liked it and it is obvious that you have spent a lot of time on it. In fact, I know I couldn't have done that in a week.
Great drawing style
Work a bit on animation and it will be fantasic.
I wish some voters would just hang themselves...
Why this has such a low score I shall never fully understand - I suppose it's just down to mass noob voting...
Anyway, to cut a long story short,
You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 1.8173 to 1.8219!
Nice one :)
thanks xela. the low score is probably due to clock haters and people who dont have flash but do have unrealistic demands.
What can I say? It was funny, fun to watch and never a dull moment. \/\/311 |>0/\/3 |-| 4 |- |- |_| !
Absolutley brilliant. Well done and well worth the hard work that must have gone into it!
Room for improvement
It was well drawn and had some good animations. I would suggest including some subtitles somewhere though because sometimes the music was too loud and made it difficult to hear what the characters were saying. Other than that, nice work.
Yah,I submitted it before I did the last check...so I didn't know the music started...just another bug I need to fix.
Every time I watch this flash it just gets better and better. It's a compelling plot line that makes you think about the story instead of just having it practically dictatedto you. This is what I like about Lilium. Keep up the good work!
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